Girlie Jackoff Lineart

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So here's a lineart and it's not so good but once I get it colored it should be really nice. Her hand took me a while but I think I got it alright.
Comments and constructive criticism are always appreciated.
Thanks and enjoy.

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Girlie jackoff - now in color! I don't know I really like the coloring, and the script to the side I added in.

Not much of a bg of course, but I like her expression there. I couldn't get her pose quite right though and it's a little more noticeable in the color version I think.

Comments and constructive criticism are always appreciated.

Thank you and enjoy.